Review: A Trail of Lightning – Delightful Worldbuilding and Emo Villains

Trail of Lightning

Title: Trail of Lightning
Author: Rebecca Roanhorse
Publisher: Saga Press
Release Date: June 26th, 2018
Genre(s): Urban Fantasy, Post-Apocalyptic
Page Count: 304 (hardback)

Rating: 7.0/10




I had an incredibly hard time sorting out my feelings on this book and I don’t know if I can say that I succeeded. There are many aspects of it that I absolutely loved, but also ones that I really disliked. And the two overlap one another, leaving me conflicted and with a frown line that’s about to become permanent.

Let’s just begin with all the things that I loved. A Trail of Lighting is a post-apocalyptic fantasy that revolves around Native American culture and history, written by a Native American author, and for that alone it deserves recognition. Roanhorse deftly weaves Navajo mythology into a Mad Max-esque world and the result is unique and exciting.

The characters that inhabit this world are strange and vibrant. From mercenaries and medicine men, to a woman who manifests as a cat-person (and I don’t mean that she really loves cats; I mean that she has facial features and mannerisms of a cat), the story occasionally dips into a Wonderland-level of creepy and weird and I adored it to bits. And what I always look forward to in Aboriginal speculative fiction is the depiction of Coyote, the trickster figure. Because he varies from one culture to the next, no two authors write him quite the same way, and Roanhorse’s version doesn’t disappoint. With appearance and mannerisms reminiscent of Neil Gaiman’s Anansi in American Gods–irreverent and dressed as a dandy–he’s probably my favourite side character.

The best urban fantasies have strong, distinctive narrative voices and this one has that in spades. Maggie’s narration is introspective, a little anti-social, and a little smoky–a-lone-ranger-staring-across-the-desert-as-the-sun-sets kind of vibe. The author uses a lot of fragmentation, which can sometimes make for choppy action sequences, but all in all, it’s highly readable and engaging.

Maggie herself is a fascinating and rather unconventional urban fantasy protagonist. She’s a monster hunter gifted–or cursed, in her opinion–with the power of speed and the ability to kill. This makes her feared and disliked by many. The entirety of the story (and probably the rest of the series) is her struggling to rein in her clan power, known as “K’aahanaánii”, and keep its bloodlust from consuming her. And the thing that I especially love is that Maggie, to some level, enjoys the killing. She loves the adrenaline and the control of it, and that comes with the baggage of guilt and self-hatred. And that’s one of my favourite kinds of stories–those of powerful men and women whose power is a double edged sword, one that comes with the risk of being devoured from the inside out. It adds extra layers of internal conflict that can potentially be catalysts for interesting character growth.

“Wow, that all sounds fantastic,” you might say. And you’re right–it is pretty fantastic!

And now here come the criticisms to rain all over this parade.

Let’s talk about the plot–or rather, the lack of one. While there’s a vague overarching goal that gets introduced at the beginning of the story, Maggie and her companion Kai spend most of their time doing the literary equivalent of accidental side quests. They travel from point A to point B, at which point something happens and they’re forced to deal with it before moving on. They end up having to constantly react to the things that happen in the world, as opposed to proactively moving the plot forward. And while some of the diversions are fun, it’s all very meandering and lacks cohesion.

Secondly, the antagonist. At the foundation of the story is Maggie’s relationship with her former mentor Neizgháni, who Maggie is kind-of-sort-of-maybe in love with. He’s built up to be this mysterious presence looming above our MC, and so much of her thought process and behaviour are rooted in this relationship that they’d had. Needless to say, I was very much looking forward to meeting the man.

So imagine my bafflement when Neizgháni finally makes his entrance and he turns out to be the embodiment of the worst of the “bad boy antagonist” trope, complete with cockiness, possessiveness, no sense of personal boundary, and long, flowing dark hair. He falls under the Kylo Ren column of character archetypes–the ones who strut around with their capes (or hair) billowing and saying things like, “Join me and we will set our thrones atop the corpses of our enemies and bathe in their blood,” with zero hint of irony. For someone who’s had so much impact on the protagonist’s life, he felt incredibly shallow and campy. Picture a very pretty, very vapid Final Fantasy villain and you won’t be far off from Neizgháni.


Like Caius from Final Fantasy XIII-2, but minus the cultural appropriation.

The thing is, I don’t mind these types of characters too much in popcorn paranormal fantasy. With those, I enjoy the campiness for what it is. But a story with worldbuilding and a protagonist of this caliber deserves someone a lot better.

The ending also adds another bewildering layer to the story. Its big reveal is underwhelming and the motivations of the villain rather nonsensical, and moreover, it ends incredibly abruptly and on a not-insignificant cliffhanger.

And here’s the most confusing part of all this: I don’t dislike the book. While I did dislike so many of its individual parts, as a whole I kind of enjoyed it and actually find myself looking forward to the sequel.

Is it the most polished, exciting fantasy I’ve read this year? No.

Is it something I would recommend to people? Hell yes.

ARC provided by Saga Press via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review

16 thoughts on “Review: A Trail of Lightning – Delightful Worldbuilding and Emo Villains

  1. Tammy says:

    What an intriguing review! I’m not sure if I should run out and buy the book or stay away from it! Who am I kidding, I’m going to read it. Besides, I have no problems with long haired male characters😉


  2. waytoofantasy says:

    Huh, interesting review there. I’ve really been looking forward to this one f or a while now and starting to see thoughts on it has me even more curious about it. I don’t mind those types of ‘bad boy antagonists’ so maybe that won’t bother me, but the lack of a coherent plot…hmm. Either way, you still enjoyed it so that speaks volumes. Definitely picking this one up for sure. 🙂


  3. Susy's Cozy World says:

    I have to stop reading your review because in the end I put all the books in the TBR and that’s not good! My TBR is a monster who tries to defy me in every possible way, it’s a little portable black-hole that seems all cute and cuddly but it tries to eat you when you distract yourself!!! Argh!
    And now I have to add to it this book, too.
    I’ve seen it around a lot but I am not so much into post-apocalyptic world-building and the plot didn’t really spike my curiosity, but then I read your review and… here I am, adding it to the list! Even the part about the emo villain (and I laughed out loud while reading the title of this post) it’s not enough to stop me!!!!!

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    • Kathy @Pages Below the Vaulted Sky says:

      AHHHHH *muppet flails* you just made my day with this comment!! I was kind of worried I might have been too harsh and that people would be like, “Well this sounds like THE WORST.” But it really IS fun and there’s a lot to like about it!

      And your portable black-hole sounds rather like a cat. Super adorable but probably plotting to kill you behind you back. Fingers crossed it doesn’t eat you too soon! 😛

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  4. @lynnsbooks says:

    This gave me a proper giggle – especially ‘“Join me and we will set our thrones atop the corpses of our enemies and bathe in their blood,”’ – lol 😀
    I was on the fence with this one and I have too many books so a pass for me.
    Love the review.
    Lynn 😀

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  5. anna says:

    it’s such a great review!! i’ve been looking forward to a trail of lightning for months so i was very happy when i saw u reviewed it. and u give some great thoughts! im very excited abt the fact that the worldbuilding and the general feeling of the book is so Good. not so much abt the antagonist u mentioned………. :/// and honestly, a good worldbuilding deserves a good plot so that sucks too. buti hope i will end up mostly enjoying the book as well!!


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